Drakaina said:
I'm back, baby!
... In my defense, sometimes you know you want to cover point A, and then point B, but you're not quite sure how to get there. Sometimes you can just roll with it. Other times, it takes you a couple months before you know what to do.Hopefully the rest of this arc won't take nearly as long to come out.
Alright it's back it lives!!! My withdrawal has ended! Seriously though it's not your fault Drakaina that it took so long sometimes you do want to 'cover point A, and then point B, but their are times when you don't know how to write those points or your first draft isn't good so you move on and edited out into the second one.
Seriously thou we all have our moments with writing fan works. Plus now that you've gotten past the writing phase you've posted the current chapter and we are loving it
Okay, so we return to our lovable protagonist Ash after she's found Aqualad who has indeed lost his memory's…which sucks. But their is a positive it seems. He still remembers the team which is a good thing as he knows he and the other sidekicks formed a team separate from the League. Which is good as we never really did find out exactly if Aqualad remembered anything at all from the loss six months. This means he at least knows Ash is on board with or an ally of the League.
Plus this gave her a chance to explain who she was. As well that she's a new member… again. Also she and Aqualad find the camp and the bio-ship again. So now Kaldur, at least is rehydrated. Also they found some supplies for their friends now they just have to find them. How hard could that be?
Thanks, the wind turns out very hard. Also Ash has her first crisis on the team and that's being with being unable to track down our teammates, which is a big deal good thing Kaldur around to coach her through it. Also look on the horizon a friend, well time to scream your lungs out and get your friend Ms. M as well as the balyians, Psimon, Kid Flash, Robin, Artemis and Superboy's attention!
Seems like canon has finally been thrown out the window for Hellbent! Also wonder if now that Ash has called out to M'gann, wonder if all the parties will start heading their way?
Drakaina said:
Yeah, I was trying to hit that balance between "reasonable enough it can work" and "still kind of suspicious". Given that no one's called me out on being unrealistic yet, I hope that means I succeeded.
I mean you kinda have with that early part of the chapter with Ash and Kaldur'ahm. As it's implied that the only reason Kaldur even allowed Ash to speak was cause she saved him.
But he's still on guard cause he's in unfamiliar to him territory. He's drying out and he's lost his memory, so he knows he's vulnerable therefore he only started to trust Ash after she told him who she was and answered his question.
So it seems real enough as Kaldur'ahm was on edge the whole time till he learned more about Ash from her exposing herself and telling him about her. So while he's still on edge he can somewhat trust this stranger. So you did succeed in what you set out to convey.
Drakaina said:
Ah, damn, that sucks.
Maybe I should try and contact the artist about it.
It's okay if anything that just means you could commission some new art, I personally would love to see the Fight between Ash, and the Legaue agaisnt Amazo.
Drakaina said:
Yay!
Dragomi125 said:
Yo, Drakaina, happy to see this back! You've been doing good work with this so far, glad to see you keeping it up!
That bit regarding Superboy and the static was quite clever and one of my favorite points for this fic.
I'm curious, how far does your YJ knowledge extend? It include comics? Outsiders and Phantom?
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In few of the previous posts Drakaina did comment that they knew about everything from season one onwards when they answered some of my questions regarding the future plot points of season one and beyond. Plus Drakaina outright confirmed that while Ash didn't get to go with Kaldur to see Atlantis during his visit. She will go with Kaldur, Miss Martian and Superboy during their diplomatic trip during a comic storyline were a certain Aquaman villian a known memeber of Vandal and Klarion serect group, cause he tries to takeover all of Atlantis and it's fellow city states. While Aquaman is away. This was comfimed by Drakaina as a story incuded in what she's defiantly cooking up for future story arc's after the present and future chapters conculde the Bialya mission.
Dragomi125 said:
In the mean time, I'm glad I wasn't the only one that noted how the memory wipe was just before the Tower of Fate mission, just before meeting Ashley.
Here's hoping this lets her get closer to M'gann and Artemis. Even if by a smidgen.
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Well the confriemd lost of time that Psimon erased/suppressed from the team's mind's in canon was a full six months. So yeah just before the Team meet Ash proper at the Tower of Fate. Which makes sense since before that the Team were busy doing their canonical missions as the serect covert Team of the League. So they only knew about Ash becuase of the Amazo briefing which had to have happened cause the fight was shown in the Lair, so that means Ash was shown helping the League fight Amazo. So all of the memories the Team had of interacting with Ash are gone/suppressed.
So technicaly yes this will/could be Ash's chance to interact with and get closer to M'gann and Artemis yes. But at the sam time remmebr last chapter clearly established that Ash has a little bit more of her memory's than the rest of the team. Like her gap in her mind is from being told of her being approved to go on a mission, to waking up in Bialya and had no idea how she got their. So realistical yes Ash could try and bond with the amnesic M'gann and Atremis but their is a possiblity they'll be even more cautious of her since they have no idea who she is. so it's a fifity fity coin toss on if she'll be able to bond with them more or will they attack her on sight Cause ya know amnesia, and their being hunted by the Bialyians and Psimon.
Dragomi125 said:
So if Hellfire's supposed to be able to destroy souls themselves, does that mean Klarion and Vandal themselves are in danger...?
Because there's no way in heaven, hell, Apokolips or wherever have you that Vandal will let that fly, no way, no how. Meaning Ashley would be in very real danger constantly...
Well yes that's true heck I think Ash's Hellfire Dragon magic is kinda why she was even able to partake in the fight between Dr Fate/Nesson and Klarion, heck she's the main reason he deicdes to bail in the first place!?! So yeah Klarion may be much more wary of her now, but at the same time remember. Klarion is a lord of Chaos so their's a possibility he kept quiet about Ash's magic cause he wants see how much chaos she'll cause within the Light's ranks mainly how Vandal is going to react to someone having the power to basically kill him regardless of his immortality. Cause let's remember something Vandal does not like it when their's a threat to his goals, like how the Reach threaten everything he was buidling. So he respond and took them out comeplely so their is a possibility that if he has leanred along with the Light then their prepareing to deal with Ash...or worse well better for them in the long run. Turn her to their side.
Cause let's remmber some of Ash's closet friends in the homeless group are missing and it's implied by Drakaina they were abducted by Klarion for the Light, to be future leverage to use on Ash and prehaps pressure her, cause having her on their side would be an amazing boon. Cause a) she's from another world/universe(depending on what Drakaina does with Fairy Tail's world), so that means she's got a lot of serects and a new form of magic in her blood and gentics. So imagine what the Light could do if they get a sample of her blood and give it to Cadmus. Also yeah Vandal might feel threaten for the first time sicne his encounter/battle with Darkside. But their is a postive to their being a threat to him, so for now unless Ash tried to actively hunt him down he's on the side of the other light members. And want's to probably exploit her, as they were dissapointed she fell into the hands of the 'heroes' but that does't mean they cannot try to abduct her here in bialya, or try and tell her why it's bad to stay on the Leagues side and conivce her to join the good guy's.
Cause remember during the first mission to bialya Superboy get's captured by the Light's specifically Queen Bee's men and Psimon. Also Ash has thrown the canon of said mission and possibly the rest of canon if Drakaina deicdes to go that route since called out to M'gann and she's bascially helped Kaldur recover and he's not unconscious, also the balyians are defintly going to show up again next chapter cause their's no way the search parties didn't hear Ash's little name calling. Also Robin, Kid Flash, and Atremis are still missing.
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